Broken.

in #zapfic6 years ago (edited)

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Deb knew she could trust her fiancé Tom completely, for she read all of his emails, checked his credit card statements regularly and kept track of all of his comings and goings with a handy little app she'd secretly installed on his phone.

Posted in response to @felt.buzz's Zapfic challenge
The prompt this week is TRUST

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Yikes! I'm feeling bad for Tom.

I wouldn't bother. You know men, they're usually guilty of something!

Hahaha, No room for the tiniest form of cheating.
The logic of "prevention is better than cure" may be applicable here.

It is really a precise narrative for the prompt

It seems that the female characters in both our stories were severely lacking in the trustworthiness department!
Cheers for the visit.

Yeah, definitely. It appears so.
Thanks very much for the compliment and your profound kindness.
THANKS :)

Genius.

You are. This story is.

Perfect

Ditto

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oh, what a lovely thing to say......and to think that my parents told me I'd never amount to anything;)

ha! howdy deirdyweirdy! Another brilliant little twist there, I don't know what you call that what she did but it's clever! Plus the artwork is nothing like I've ever seen before, there should be some kind of reward just for that!

Haha Mr. J, your comment is surely enough reward. You never fail to make me smile.

lol. thank you deirdyweirdy and you never fail to put out great posts!

Okay, that was fucking creepy :)) Well, that's what I expected from you, of course, but still...not sure I want to trust someone quite that much.

Hahahah, well in my book one can never be too creepy careful!

If you need to install such an app then you have some serious trust issues!

Or, you need to install such an app so there won't be any trust issues;);)

Love this one @deirdyweirdy :)

Cheers and thanks for the visit. You've been very quiet lately.

Been working on a longer story off the chain :) (as in off the blockchain)

That's allowed I suppose;)

HaHa! No trust at all. Love this! : )

While waiting for Marriane today, I finally had to lay down and fell asleep. Ran to the computer when I woke up and saw that she posted the new prompt 2 hours earlier...but...you had already been there with dust flying in the wind. So sorry!!! : (

No worries m'dear. I called Marianne on discord and demanded that she post the prompt forthwith or else!
When I didn't see any sign of you after a couple of hours I guessed you'd had to lay your head down so I just motored through the rest of them. Take it easy girl and I hope to see you in better fettle next week.

The scary thing is, I've a work colleague who's friend does something eerily similar to his partner.
Good one, well done deirdy.

Hahaha, that's gas. I'm delighted to hear I'm not the weirdest weirdo out there.

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Dammit checky, that's the second time you've caught me out!

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