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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #20: Valentine Special- 199 words, a lovely prize pool, everyone wins!

in #writing7 years ago

She was the most gorgeous thing I've ever seen. Her eyes were amazing, she had a killer smile, she was the nicest person I'd ever seen. Little wondering fell for her like a pack of cards. I asked her out, she made me wait for over a month without a yes or a no. During the Valentine's season, she called me up one day and said yes. I was so excited, I was going to show her how amazing I was so I emptied my piggy bank. I then took her to the best restaurant in town.

She looked impressed, that made me happy. I was about to order the most expensive, but she said I shouldn't spend that much on her. Wow, she was a considerate person, so I got some moderately priced dishes. That was my very first Valentine, so I was going to make it special for myself like I was going to do for her.
We went strolling in the park. While strolling, we got to know each other better. She told me a lot about herself, and I was really blown away. Then for the first time in my life, I kissed someone special.