Thanks man, it needs polished, but I like the idea of submitting fresh work on Steamit and getting reader feedback. Makes the writing process more like a collaboration. I liked your piece too btw - https://steemit.com/story/@markrmorrisjr/original-short-fiction-blocked-pt-1
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Funny, how we see the flaws in our own work more clearly. The concept seems strong and you've established several characters already. I'm looking forward to seeing how it plays out.
Hah, yeah I'm a perfectionist, it's the flaws that always leap out first ...