First I would like to say I found a time space to read your story :D So, I started reading and sense like moving from Oregon to Florida seems to be a real life experience of yours! Somehow it might be... Then the story flows... and again my senses says it looks like a personal experience! I don't know whether I am correct or wrong! But that's perfectly sense me through your writing! And at the end of part #1 you made it! The pulse you manage to keep in your every writing was there :D Curiosity and you made me thinking... WTF is that! Yeah, as you said "it made for a welcome curiosity."!
Now, I am awaiting to the Part #2 and hope I could make a time slot to read it well!
Thank you very much for sharing such great writings with us! Great work you are doing!@alexbeyman,
Cheers~