SPOKEN WORDS

in #writing8 years ago

Good afternoon my sweet steemit family, it's your steemit babygirl @steemcenturion.

Today I want to try out something I've been doing before but stopped for sometime now, it's called spoken words poetry, I do hope you enjoy it, anyways you can drop your reactions in the comment section below. Here it is, Enjoy
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*Spoken words
We're From Here...
In a small town somewhere
The same burdens we all bear
But how the govt views this is unclear..
Before you pullout your brooms and umbrellas out, pause there, OH yeah, all fair
So me and my friends have dreams and mine Just happens to be music, nun much gives me greater Joy than to sing, create, and have my best friend produce it.
Sometimes I just look to him and say we just got to let the music sink in,
Cause I don't got no CV, no Label, and am done with school yet no afters, no masters, that's not the life I want so I just pray certain things comes faster.
But we're okay we comfortable, I know we're blesses to even be here God has been faithful, so am still playing this beat writing dreams now, thinking on how everything seems now, today I went to the movies alone and No one bothered me...
One guy said what's up but couldn't remember where he has seen or heard of me, though I wanna be that guy who can't walk through the mall, or the guy who spends no time with his family at all
Is it all we killing for? Or do we just try?
Cause the truth is some people just die and I don't wanna look back when am 17 and just be some Guy. "And when I share my stories let the questions be how and not why" the future is the past you can change to me, so if you decide the story you wanna tell 20 years from today whats it gonna be? So we can seat here tonight and pave it out
Or we can hit the show clubs and wave it out, go out tonight and have a great time, Good music, pretty woman and great wine
And the journey back to the car we can barely walk a straight line, and we can't tell if the girls are pretty cause after two or three shots all ladies stay fine.. 😂
So the girls dishing out lies and we laughing at the taste, cause if I hit it or my men hit it
We'll set the place ablaze.
please pardon me for talking like a waste, But the truth is I pray to be blessed to help and provide for someone, and to be a guide for someone
Cause some people don't need much
Some people just need lunch
We're from here.....
Give someone a help today..
Live out a story you'll be proud to say
Cause if I bring happiness to a few, and you do exact same too there's no telling what we could do.
✌️ WereFromHere😊

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Nice composition dear, but a little advice.
My experience on Steemit has taught me that the use of pictures helps in understanding a post better.

It expresses a sentence, paragraph or even a word. So when next you're drafting a post make use of more pictures.

Thank you so much sir, I'll keep that in mind when making new posts

Thoughtful advice.
I'm @lorenzo1420