Remember that the reply with the most upvotes on their comment after five days (Friday 30th July) is the winner and their paragraph is added to the story.

At the moment @jrhughes is ahead

@jrhughes (2 votes)
@carolkean (1 vote)
@hndmarshall (1 vote)
@kathieletalis (1 vote)
@horrorguyian (1 vote)
@wisbeech (0 votes)
@holoz0r (0 votes)

Please get your friends, followers and anyone else to vote on your reply if you want the honor of being the first paragraph in the Steemit novel :-)