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RE: [Original Novel] Champion of the Little People, Part 3

in #writing7 years ago

@alexbeyman you really make the condition so descriptive that it becomes easy to picture the whole scene

From behind every nicknack on the mantle, every shoe by the door and every picture on the shelves, a little green light waved to and fro. I fought back the cry of relief and instead scooped them all up in my hands and, making three trips, transported them upstairs.

You really are a great writer brotha....