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Seriously? This is gonna cost me an upvote, but you took the time to read this and that's what stuck in your head? Wow, you must be fun at parties. LOL

It would take too long to correct the whole thing, so I settled for the most obvious error. :)

Well, thanks for yor tyme

Lol dude, are you always this defensive when someone dares to say your work isn't perfect?

*Part Two, the Conclusion can be found here! Enjoy!*

You really want me to correct it?