Hi, my comments are quite long. Placed it in a separate response post.
https://steemit.com/writing/@mgaft1/response-to-ahe-ey-perfection-by-jamielefay
BTW if you are interested in really strong women I've met one. In her life, she overcame huge odds and remain cheerful, witty, humble and ver helpful person. Here's I put to a paper one of her stories https://steemit.com/writing/@mgaft1/spiritual-healing-claustrophobia-case