Awesome story, man. Your dialogue is great: funny, obtuse and profound. A Really touching piece.
Your might want to take another pass for grammar and formatting, though :P
Awesome story, man. Your dialogue is great: funny, obtuse and profound. A Really touching piece.
Your might want to take another pass for grammar and formatting, though :P
Proof reading isn't my strongest haha, I literally need to go over every sentence 10 times and there is still likely to be a mistake or two.