Welcome! This will be a long ride (hopefully write 1 chapter per week) I don't want to rush things and this is my first fantasy novel..
If you notice any spelling errors please tell me in the comments.
Look forward to keeping you all entertained Steemians!
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'It would seem.. This is my eternal resting place'
On top of a hill just outside of Azure Heaven City stood a man, around this man for as far as human eyes could see there were dead bodies as if they were a plague littering the earth.
Upon a closer look one could see that even the hill the man was above was made up of human corpses and he was only standing by leaning onto his spirit weapon, a spear which was dyed blood-red from the slaughter of thousands of beings.
The mans crimson hair was slowly dimming revealing his white hair, his skin was starting to crack, his body was filled with wounds.. He had been forced to burned his life essence to the point of no return during this battle.
Tears formed in his sorrow-filled eyes which then began falling down sides of his cheeks.
Dawn was coming to an end and as the first rays of sunshine started to fall upon him he whispered 'I am sorry.. I was incapable.'
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