I haven't read your story parts 1,2,3, I have only just found this post. The story held my attention all the way through. It has piqued my interest to find out more. There is substance, and strength that draws attention to Lem and his history. I would like some of his memories slipped in through it, however as I haven't yet read the other editions that comment may be premature. Well done. Be proud of your writing and please continue. Thank you for sharing.
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It certainly isn't premature and thanks for the comment! There is plenty more to write as Lem's tale is just beginning. I'll work on trying to include some of his memories while he's adventuring. Glad you've enjoyed it thus far!