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RE: Opening small chapter for the book I am writing. Would love some honest opinions? :)

in #writing7 years ago

Hi @Zugzwang34, thank you for your comment! And thank you for your following :)

Due to my paranoia I do not want to share of the blueprint of my book on a social platform. But chapters will either introduce elements of life that are necessary to find peace and serenity in life. It will also challenge modern day treasures that are illusionised with happiness

I like your perception of the role reversal ..did make me smile knowing readers perhaps will form their own theories :D

As for the grammar ..you are certainly spot on ..it is a working progress lol

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Best of luck to you :)