Nice piece, interesting throughout the story.
I would advice to keep an eye on where to put commas, though, but that's my only feedback.
Keep writing!
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Nice piece, interesting throughout the story.
I would advice to keep an eye on where to put commas, though, but that's my only feedback.
Keep writing!
Thank you for reading, and for your advice. I will keep my eye out for the commas. Have a great day!!