My freedom

in #writing7 years ago


I was my parents’ darling
I was the teachers’ pet
Everyone on my street wanted their kids to be like me
At social events, I was the epitome of perfection
But when you take a good look at my life
You'll see that I was like a robot
I had being programmed from birth to be perfect
Everyone expected too much from me
I was not allowed a say in my own life
I was not allowed to express myself
Eventually, I snapped
I've become what everybody describes as evil
I've experimented with various things
My family claims I've brought them shame
However, for the first time in my life
I can take in the air and breathe easy
I can now spread my wings and fly really high
I'm not perfect but I am me
I now make mistakes but they are my own
Now, I can wear the clothes I want
My family chose people for me to date
It's good for you to make good alliances, they said
Now, I can date the ones I want
My family built me for a white collar job
Do something that brings a steady paycheck, they said
But now, I'm trying out my hands at several things at ones
If I had stayed the same, I would not have found Steemit
I'm far from being a whale but I know I'm getting there
you can call me a good kid gone bad
However, I do not really care
Though I'm far from who I want to be
Only now am I really free.

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welcome to the Steemit community, @Illuminatus! Wish you much luck! Cheers! Follow me at @khunfarang

Welcome friend!
Mice poem!
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stop spamming his posts, next time I will flag you. You did not upvote but you want him to check out your blog and upvote

Hello there ! @ehiboss
Thanks for your concern, but while i was commenting at this post my voting power was low and it would have resulted 0.00$ upvote to @illuminatus . so i didint upvote at that time!
Thank you!

okay, sorry but I thought you were one of those follow-follow people. My apologies

No need to apologies my friend. Just steem on!
cheers! @himal

Welcome steemit friend a greeting. follow me @andrestales

Welcome and Thank You for being with us!! Following your Blog now

It is incredible that society is so determined to control that we can not be free or in our way of thinking

Very nice, thank you for sharing. Will be looking forward to your posts.
up-voted :-)

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Hey, welcome to steemit. :) You seem like an interesting individual! Good luck on here! Upvoted and I followed you as well.

Welcome to steemit, happy to have you here

Welcome to the amazing world of steemit. Followed. Follow me back 😘