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RE: Steemit novel : Competition CLOSED ( winner announced soon)

in #writing7 years ago

As he looked at her he knew she was right he should have bought that house in the mountains , but there was no arguing about it right now. He reaches for a hunting rifle and tosses it and a box of shells onto the sofa. "lock and load make yourself useful !"... he cried out to her as she glared back ... "they will be here within the hour and I for one plan to give them hell".... he tells her as he loads another rifle and a pistol laying them out on the table. It was then that he heard the whirr of a helicopter...

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Nice twist and opening for the next paragraph!