The sensory detail in the first paragraph (the crunch of packed snow, the rattle of pennies) really pulled me in.
Very nice.
Thank you for sharing
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The sensory detail in the first paragraph (the crunch of packed snow, the rattle of pennies) really pulled me in.
Very nice.
Thank you for sharing
Thanks so much for your kind words! I appreciate it!