The way that is descrived it gives me the sensation that it wass thinked to be a scrypt for a movie, im i right?.
In any way it does recreate the scene very well, i will read the 2nd part.
Thumps up for you! Keep it up!
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This was conceived initially as a short story.....though perhaps it can be more. I'm working on it anyway ;)