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RE: [Original Novel] Champion of the Little People, Part 3

in #writing7 years ago

From the jolly reunion to the teasing its filled with emotion that you have put in. Yesterday i got worried as to what happened to the little ones but now its more calmer. Thats the sense you put in thats the curiosity you create with those little things. Moreover maybe the girls liked him thats why they kept on chasing him. However the section of todays part i believe was not to beat anyone to make the bullies stay away from you. This shows your heart towards little things that really can hurt inside as you are aware of the feeling yourself also.
Anyways i wander how many more parts are still to come?