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RE: Free Agency

in #writing7 years ago

Ooooo gosh! I love how you put this;-

As young and eager spirits grow,
Embracing that which doth engage,
So choosing what and who to trust,
Yet knowing we'll return to dust.

This peotic sentence got me in the heart;-

Yet knowing we'll return to dust.

So true it is Baby.

Ooooo mine o minel Oboy, woww. Who are you Dearie? You are so good Baby! Wow;-

And as the journey takes its toll,
On all who make this life their goal,
Possessions and infatuations,
Mature at first, yet come to naught.

And this last paragraph nailed the point home Dear;-

And so my children, choose this day,
Whom and what ye shall obey,
For as you sow so shall ye reap,
And what you choose, that shall ye keep.

Great content Sweetheart! Keep steeming.

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Thank you.