Actually I think you are right that the f words are a bit crude. Have done a few edits to smooth it out a bit for family viewing, Thanks
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Actually I think you are right that the f words are a bit crude. Have done a few edits to smooth it out a bit for family viewing, Thanks
Thank you so much! Yes, I run into the f-words quite a bit...and as realistic as your story was written out, I didn't think you threw it in gratuitously. But I do really appreciate the edits. Keep writing! You have a great touch with storytelling.