I read a book that did this once. I didn't give it a very good review. It got too repetitive because we never knew what time it was and things kept repeating. I find the best course is to write then edit carefully, constantly asking yourself if your person knows this. And maybe sometimes the scene is better from another head, depending on what you are working on.
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yeah, It can get repetitive so don't do it on every change... I think it's better done once in 30 page.