Absence / Poem English/ Inglés

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Absence / Poem

I opened my eyes, I can not breathe
My head explodes in pain
Where I am?
Scream of pain

They watch me,
ask my name
I do not know ...
My mouth hurts ...

Little by little my breathing
it calms down
I know what happened
you again ...

You have come without invitation,
Absence, gave me a beating,
you take everything, you leave me empty
you take me for moments my tranquility, my memories

Absence I must learn to live.
of your impromptu visits,
you live in my body
You behave.

Original by @ artemisjane26

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It is lovely.
Thanks for the translation, so people like us would understand

I definitely got the message through your translation! What a sad and beautiful piece.

Thanks for reading, it's my first poem in English @lavender-blurbs and I'm glad you understood the message