I've been meaning to ask you @michelle.gent to be my mentor but I am just too shy :-)
By the way, I was also too shy to ask you to read the first few paragraphs of my novel. I've posted it 4 months ago and still didn't come around to ask for your opinion.
https://steemit.com/writing/@alexpavlenko/my-first-fantasy-novel-the-new-world-order-working-title
Please be as harsh in your critique as you want.