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RE: Number 203 - A short story

in #writing7 years ago

Nice story. There are some errors to fix but overall I like it. I know a fire fighter who went through a situation similar to this but lucky for him and his team the outcome wasn't so grim.

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Thanks. I'll make an effort to go back and proof read again when less tired. Appreciate the read.