I like youre message here but take care to pay close attention to the flow of your writing as it can easily be missinterpreted and looses bearing as it becomes more confusing. Maybe have friends or other users help with you're depiction of concepts as they are easy to understand yourself, but a lack of eloquence will loose the interest of readers unframiliar with you're concepts since they have to put youre scentences together like a puzzle to understand your point. I love your ending though, i presume you meant "concentrate not on problems, but opportunities" which is beautiful. Welcome to steemit :)