I like your verse. You make me think of a dying person being reincarnated. I dunno. I read it twice. It felt like a complete incomplete poem or vice versa.
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I like your verse. You make me think of a dying person being reincarnated. I dunno. I read it twice. It felt like a complete incomplete poem or vice versa.
It is always interesting to read how other people perceive one's poem. I believe after any publication, the author is dead and its the readers who are alive.
I think I know how you feel because time itself is such an illusory concept. If there were no calendars would we still be running out of time?
Don't forget to count the clocks and the sun. They kinda tell us the time, too.