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RE: It's My Storm - wewrite freewrite Week 4

in #wewrite5 years ago

You know, that's very interesting and I believe you are likely correct, but (being honest here) I do remember noticing the word "ride" but it didn't translate for me into riding horseback. Maybe it was because when I'd gotten that far I was already plotting it out as a story taking place in the current time frame?

I just can't remember why the word didn't jump out at me, as it should have.

I think it could refer to a ride in a car, since he probably would be driven by a chauffeur and therefore be "riding," but I think it's more likely that your interpretation is correct. :)

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It's interesting to see everyone's interpretations.

When I wrote the prompt, I imagined it taking place around the time that @mgaft1 said, but I intentionally left it vague. So modern day or historical are both fine. He could be riding a horse, a bike, in a carriage, in a car, whatever you all wanted for your stories. 😉

Yes, I think it being vague had something to do with the direction I went. The way you used it was very clever as a key part of the prompt, giving the feeling of going one way, but also allowing for a broader interpretation. Thanks for the explanation!

Yeah, the ride with a chauffeur fits the template snugly. It's interesting how we all perceive different things from the same startup template. Cheers!