Nicely done @bleedinheart That was really believable, pretty scary that the likes of this happens, but the main guy was very shallow too, so he may of deserved a little bad luck, but he got a shedload!! Engaging writing though, fair play to you
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Why thank you!! Wasnt sure where it was going but it came together nicely, even if it was on the sinister side, haha
It was really good and believable which I like in writing..