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This was pretty interesting. Well edited and shot with a good camera. My only criticism is maybe to many shots from in the car. Maybe more with you walking or sitting at more interesting locales. The parts with you at the gun range we're good, for example. Good luck, man, and welcome to Steemit! Also, I'm not sure if you posted this to YouTube or DTube, but DTube will probably give you greater visibility on this platform.

Thanks great advice bro I appreciate it!