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RE: Alarm Application Using node-notifier in Electron

in #utopian-io7 years ago

I thank you for your contribution. Here are my thoughts on your post;

  • There are some punctuation and structure mistakes in your paragraph. I suggest you to double check your post on spelling, grammar, structure, and punctuation. Having these mistakes makes your post hard to read and understand. A tutorial must be formal and easily understood.

  • As your concept in the tutorial is already well covered in the documentation, explaining it with an example was unnecessary. So, I suggest you dive into more complex concepts in electron or find another project which hasn't got any or ill documentation.

  • Titles show what your post is about, so use them wisely. As you're teaching concepts with the examples, it is wise to write them on your titles, so keep doing that. But, positioning them is also essential. The main thing you're teaching in the tutorial is an electron module, not the example. Instead of writing the example to the head of the title, change the position of it. So that way, you can directly catch readers/viewers attention to what you teach instead of the example. I'll give an example of what I meant;

    • "node-notifier module in Electron with Alarm Application Example"

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