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RE: Openshot Series - For Professionals: Time Is Money(Part 4)

in #utopian-io6 years ago

Hello @igormuba,

I appreciate the effort put in writing this series of posts for Openshot project. This part is quite interesting as it's related to saving money for better value. Although, I missed the previous parts of the series. However, I took the time to glance through part two and three. It is obvious that you put a lot of effort into the contents. You shared your experiences, and the post contains useful information about the project. Anyone willing to use Openshot can get essential details about the application in the series.

However, I have a few issues with some of the information. First, you repeat your definition for openshot in every part of the series. To make it better, you could rephrase the definition in a way that it will portray the same meaning to readers. Also, There is a repetition of information in the post which made reading a little bit tiring.
Also, this post did have proofreading issues. I'd suggest a more thorough check of your future texts. Perhaps, you could use Hemingway to improve your texts.
Lastly, You are doing a pretty good job by publishing 5-6 blog posts in a week, but you should pay more attention to your texts.

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Wow, thank you very very much for the many suggestions you have made.

The repetition of the explanation of what is Openshot was designed for people that are landing on the post without following the series, to get them on the same page, but I do take the feedback serious and will think of a better way to get both, the followers of the series, and newcomers, on the same page.

I will take a way on that "Hemingway", thank you very much for all of the effort you put on reading and giving all of those suggestions to improve

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