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RE: Save A lot Of Time And Energy Batch Uninstalling Apps With Batch Uninstaller

in #utopian-io6 years ago (edited)

Hello, @rufans!

Thank you for another nice contribution to the blog category. I have never used this tool, and it looks simple and quite useful. Thank you for taking the time to create an informative blog post about this application.

On the content side, I like all the information provided. The post is detailed and editorial, and I particularly enjoyed reading about your personal views and experience with this tool. This is the kind of editorial content we like to see in blog posts, and it goes without saying that I appreciate the effort you put into your work. However, I have to admit that I wanted to read a bit more about the project and its key features.

That said, there were issues of style and proofreading, but not to the level where it hurt the readability of your text. I would be happy to provide a few examples in a follow-up comment, if you wish.

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Yes, the project is simple and straight forward.
In every blog post I publish, I'm always trying not to make it hard for the reader to understand my point, and at the same time be fun at least. But it seems like the fun part isn't working out for me. Are there any tips to be fun? I don't know if I sound weird. But I need it tbh.😂
Also, kindly cite me with the bad sentences thanks. 👌Hello @lordneroo,

Hello!

But it seems like the fun part isn't working out for me. Are there any tips to be fun? I don't know if I sound weird. But I need it tbh.😂

Well, eliminating grammatical errors is necessary for your contributions to be marked as fun to read. We prioritize quality writing in the blog category.

I will cite a few examples for you:

I had once mentioned in one of my blog posts that “I usually install a minimum of one application on my Android devices on a daily basis”.

There's no need to use Past Perfect here. This tense is used when we talk about something that happened in the past, and we want to refer back to something that occured before that time. This sentence should read: "I once mentioned in one of my blog posts that I install a minimum of one application on my Android devices on a daily basis."

If you are a user like me who do not want to root his Android device for anything...

This sentence should read: "If you are a user like me who does not want to root their Android device for anything..."

Those were the only bad experience I had with Batch Uninstaller.

This sentence should read: "Those were the only bad experiences I've had with Batch Uninstaller."

I hope you will find this comment useful.

Always cite them for me if there would be any.

I want to add a bit to what @lordneroo wrote here. Fun is, of course, subjective. But it is about being entertaining. Beyond the information, is reading it a fun experience.

I also want note that "fun" is an added value. A post can definitely receive the maximum score without being fun to read. A well constructed, well written, informative post that scores highly on the rest of our parameters will definitely be eligible for that.

Noted. Thank you.

Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!