Thank you for this contribution to the Blog category.

When deciding on the level of editorial and personal detail needed in a post, I strongly recommend considering the nature of the project. In this case, you're writing about a dApp that is one of the earliest and biggest on Steem. Every shred of information one could possibly write about Busy.org has already been written multiple times right here on Steem. So what is the unique value your post brings? That is what you should be asking yourself when writing about a project such as this. Sadly, with this post, you didn't bring much of that.

In addition, to that, the post would have greatly benefited from closer attention being paid to issues of style and grammar. I'll give one small example:

Design to me is very important.

This should have been "Design is very important to me." It could also have been "For me, design is a very important element." There are similar examples throughout the text. A second and third go-over would have, I hope, helped you clear those up.

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