Hello! I have a recommendation. It might not agree with everybody, but it is my opinion.

Focus on others. Help others, respond to them, say nice things, encourage, compliment, challenge in constructive ways, engage, humour, delight - others.

Continue to write, practice and develop your art. The example you provided seems as if you summarized a news item from another source; creativity, originality, innovation, profundity, humanity, beauty, ecology, photography; these are the thing I look to recommend and enjoy on Steemit.