#untalented-mama: A DAUGHTER'S REPLY TO HER MOTHER

in #untalented-mama7 years ago (edited)


The most precious day of your life was when I was born,
collected flour sacks were torn,
your hands shed my wet body to dry
your fingers wiped my tears when I cry,
deep ears hear you praised to the sky.

You do anything to dress me up,
you can cross the river just for me,
you are not shy to shout aloud in order to cheer me,
you sacrificed many things that now I see.

I remembered when I was 8 years old,
when my friends played their dolls paid with gold,
you stared at me envied to them,
and then I asked, "mama, why can't I have toys they seem?"

In the next month, I woke up very happy,
when the rustic doll laid at me,
but I was disturbed when I knew the story,
you hiked the neighbor place which is faraway.

When I am sick I feel your care and comfort,
you're always there when I freaked at the port,
when you are sick, sometimes I cannot do the same,
but you are understanding,
because your love for me is an eternal flame.

One day I dated someone,
but my phone always rang,
you freaked because I was away,
when I leave home you always worry.

One day you saw me crying,
immediately tears were wiped and stopped whipping,
I thought you would not notice of the sadness I felt,
I followed you but you were so downcast too.

To be with you is my happiest day,
you protect me for the sake of my safety,
when your hair will turn to gray,
remember who you nurtured yesterday,
time passes by that she will pay .

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I was very touched..

Nice nostalgic memory.

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yay grabe kaka iyak

"when your hair will turn to gray,
remember who you nurtured yesterday"
I love this line, made me cry a bit. hehe.. Thanks for this.

God bless our mothers

friend!!! nang ningbawt ako balhibo!!! grabi! ayusa uy! as a mama, maka proud kaayo, himoan unta ko sako anak ani uy heheh

Daghan pud diayg bisaya diri?! weeehhhh.. kalingaw!!

hi!! power bia kau mga bisaya :)

I really love the last five lines! So much love for this. Short but full of love.

my goodness girl, i am not a mom but i honestly feel your messages. thanks for sharing

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My friend. This is very beautiful. Makes me want to cry.

so true all words..

reading your poem makes me cry.

this is beautiful sis! very heartfelt. mothers are the best! ❤

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