Thank you Lord for a chance to live. Thanks for listening, I thought its my time to go. Thank you for allowing me to stay with them I hope you continue to allow me until they can take good care of themselves and successful in all their chosen field.
#2ndlife
I thought I can still work like a twenty year old but I was wrong. In 3 days I only have 6hrs sleep and during the time I'm awake I work hard to earn much for my children and family. My body was so exhausted and after the 3rd day my body tells me to stop. My body is shaking I can breathe, I feel cold but I have perspiration and I can't see, I'm feeling that my world is shaking, my body was so numb but my head is aching so hard. I thought its the end of me, thanks God for still helping me.
You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:
It should be until instead of untill.