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RE: Across Worlds... A Twenty Four Hour Short Story

in #twentyfourhourshortstory6 years ago (edited)

Yeah, right?... Any other day I may have added a few more sentences there. But I was running late for submission. It's a contest entry you know.

Regardless though, it does leave room for imagination, doesn't it? Like even I myself did sit and wonder what the three months of courtship must have been like... Or was it not up to three months courtship? Did she carry baby Velvet for more than nine months (since dad is from Mars y'know)... And what was in that memo? Why was it very brief? Lol...

Yeah, now maybe I'll go write a part 2.

Thanks for the nice words... Glad you enjoyed it.

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No worries, I get it :) Submission before dateline is always nerve wrecking! Oo yes, you are right, so many questions left unanswered! Wonder, wonder. It will be interesting to read Part 2. Will you be writing it? :)

Would definitely be trying to. 😊