RE: First I had to get there - Hitchiking to Kiev

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onewomanwalks (60)in #travelfeed • 5 years ago

This is a very long story so I've spilt it into two parts. Looking back at this, which I wrote just over a year ago, I can see just how much better I've got. Sharper and more concise. Writing is a constant process of improvement.

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jamerussell (62) 5 years ago (edited)

@onewomanwalks I have chosen your #introduceyourself to feature in my #excellentblogpost series, and I know you have written this a long time ago, and your intro is beautiful, so under commentmade from some extremely experienced Steemians to me I want to make sure that you take your most excellent posts and put paragraph spacing in there! These are really long for some of us to read, and it's hard on the eyes for some of us...

You are an excellent writer, keep us informed as to how it is going, quite a few of us are waiting for the rest of this post and subsequent posts that you write!
Happy Steeming!

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onewomanwalks (60) 5 years ago

Thanks for the feedback, you're absolutely right about the lack of paragraphs. This was a particularly wordy blog too, I was very excited after the journey and wanted to get everything out.

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