Good choice of subject, but lacks something personal to relate to. It reads a lot like an airline travel magazine. An interesting bit of history, or a tale about some unique local inhabitant could spritz things up a little. While many people like to stay at resorts, it's not really something one'd care to read about unless one is specifically looking for resorts to stay at.
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Thank you for you advise. Indonesia has a lot of the best resorts in the world, well-known in Bali or in Karimun Java and many have a lot of hidden tourist haven.