as you are new i would like to make a few suggestions...or perhaps pose some questions to think about.
the photos are awesome and not plagiarized... so that is a great start.
the first question to ask...would i look at this post if it wasnt mine? Why? the description feels accurate and informational... so that for sure interests some...but why stop there...
what i see that makes a great post and gets the upvotes is adding part of yourself to the post.
give the info. but also give how the place made you feel. what did it smell like? was it cold that day/hot? did you meet anyone interesting or have any interesting moments happen when you were there? give us a little window into what this place meant to you in that moment. give us a little interaction had that you may have had with a stranger. Help us to feel the place and the photos...as well as learn the info about it.
great start though...good luck.