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RE: Lily and Nadine (Short Fiction)

When I started to read, I didn't know what to expect. But it was so interesting and I loved how you played with the words that I had to continue.. Slowly, I started to get it.. I like the twist with the diary when actually she asked her to assist her with the suicide. And it all turned around differently. I can imagine how Lily was freaked out. And then the situation in the farm house. I wouldn't close my eyes for the rest of my life :D

Great story! I wouldn't say it's that scary but I would rather classify it as 'creepy' :) It was absolutely creepy! Perfect for Halloween!

Thank you for sharing!

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Yay! I think creepy is more what I was going for, so I'm glad you dig it!

Happy Halloween!