Some thoughts-
Bold vs WENDE- Not going to lie, I felt pretty bad for Bold here, he got buried. Although maybe that was the intent, as a setup for a feud. Also, I should have been more clear, WENDE's theme song is actually "One Man Army" by Porcelain Black, "nightcore" is just the type of remix that particular video linked to.
The fight was pretty good, although I feel like Bold should have been given more props by the commentators after the win, and maybe WENDE could have been shown a little worse off at the end.
I was a little annoyed by the "faux girl" descriptions, it implies WENDE's not female. I think consistently describing her as a robot girl, android girl or gynoid would be sufficient.

Lulu Biggs vs Thomas Mills- I found it really weird that Mills didn't have a secret service detail (required by law to protect major presidential and vice presidential candidates for 120 days before the general election) or if that's not an option, a private security detail, given that many of his opponents are publicly known to send assassins after the opposition.

Kronin vs Sokolov- That was awesome! Commentary was on point and its rhythm nicely integrated with the flow of combat. Kronin very convincingly had Hank for the first two thirds of the match, and Hank turned it around with a believable amount of difficulty. I found the brawl after Kara intervened to be a real shocker and I'm pleased with how brutal the Russians came off as. And wow, you definitely did Hank's Gorbachev Gore signature justice.

Vastrix vs damn near everyone- I think this was a solid fight. The larger paragraphs could have been broken up for readability, into halves or thirds. I would have enjoyed some mention of how tired and beat up Jeremiah was at the end, considering how much of the match he spent simply being pummeled by Reaganator and Huckleberry. Nice of Huckleberry to boost his heel credentials with that postmatch sneak attack, I liked that victory dance. I also would have liked a description of the "Cyborg Shimmy Shake", it sounds too interesting to not describe! I felt pretty satisfied with this match overall.