((RAP)) Termite cypher #14

in #thecut7 years ago (edited)

A quick scribble on the subway and this is what i came up with for @termitemusic cypher nbr 14! This beat was DOPENESS! Enjoy!


Big up #thecut

Lyrics:

Mono massive, Limes, BVA be dancing to a Jackie sound
Il Never leave it in the past or afterlife
my mind and ive been interwined
to plait a nasty rhyme
...All them bitches gets confused you better stand in line

Il be ethereous a guiding light...
If you need me too Calling me a one man splinter group
Mellifluous, melicious and perticularly new the game refusing me
but i wont be stopped...

Ilabaca jumping rails to get on top of em im running like im Gatlin from a doping test
...Got Mad Max road rage
Last text about them fake mcs
I know nagging but its for the best

Tulip
u know what im sayin Usain on the beat insane as a supersayin im groupie claiming
Spraying canns obaying evry law i can and kill it on the stage
Later end up drowning in bootys shaking

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TOO DOPE BROTHER!!!!!!
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Alright man, so your flow is on point. Timing slipped maybe once or twice. Could've been a bit longer though. All in all I was diggin it, just can't get too much of a feel for it cuz so short. Clicked that upvote!

I just actually finished mine. Feedback for feedback?

Ye originally i dissed these lyrics becuz i didnt like em to much but then i thought id just throw something toghether! Appreciate the feedback brother! One love!

Really enjoyed this man! Dope as fuck!