I lost my mother six years ago and not a day goes by that I don't wish she was here to see the woman I have become. I wish she could meet her 3 grandchildren and play with them. See all their individual personalities and let them get to know her but sadly it will never happen.
I wrote this poem about my mother recently I would love some feedback.
Ive never seen an angels wings
Caress the clouds like a dream
Ive never known a love so strong
You take my breath away
Why did you fly so far away
It breaks my heart and makes me weep
You gave me life now you are in eternal sleep
Glide my angel glide
My heart just swells with pride
When I remember
Your beautiful face
Glide my angel glide
I feel you near tho i cant see you anymore
In my dreams we share our secrets and more.
When i close my eyes and feel the wind
Brush past my face i Imagine your lips brushing my forehead one more time
I miss you everyday but will meet again where i will hug you forever more
Welcome sarahnabbs !!!
So glad you started posting and joined steemit ! Can't wait to read more from you.
Thanks so much lopezdacruz I am really excited about joining. I am humbled that you like my poem. Can't wait to see your articles too