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RE: All In - Short Story

in #story7 years ago

Genius! I felt like I was watching an episode of Black Mirror on Netflix! Need to develop Rob's history, perhaps he grew up with a silver spoon in his mouth but his father squandered the money away in high stakes gambling. Each time Rob gambles he see's his father standing before him telling him he's worthless which causing him anxiety and anger pushing him to continue to be worth something... Love your story.