Crazy set up chapter bro, very detailed with the dialogue, and the idea of Daniel and his men being tortured psychologically. Loved this one, great stuff bro
By the way I know you can't fix this mistake here but maybe if you publish the book
""Loud and clear." He exclaimed over the phone's speaker. "How's everything going with you and Brad?""
You said Brad but meant to say Daniel. I wish we could edit again a month back but now we only have a week to edit our posts after submitting them to the blockchain
Hey, my bro. Thanks for letting me know. Dunno how that slipped past me but anyhow, all these stories are clean draft copies. Will publish them as all in one books in the future on Steemit. But for now I'll make a note so I can change it back to what I meant to write, lol.
Thanks once again for your great comment, bro. :)
You're very welcome bro, if you ever need my editing services, I have a sharp eye for these kinds of things, just let me know.