Of course I will follow your new series too, @honeychum. You write well. You write in a good flow. Hence correcting would be tantamount to obstructing the flow. We all need to first explore ourselves uninhibited. Corrections in art are a restraint. 😊Proofreading is more appropriate. There is only one thing in writing that is to be externally cultivated , and that is vocabulary. A good vocabulary means better expression. All the rest is talent. 😊... You have a talent for infusing passion and creating a scene with ease. Work around your talent 😊...