Very touching and soul stirring truth of history. And you have written it beautifully. Your writing made the whole story come alive. Isabella's love and concern and Kaichu's righteousness and empathy towards the villagers and love towards Isabella is so palpable. You breathed life into the story. The torture seems so real. As if it is happening right now. And that photograph of the grave is so haunting. May their soul rest in peace. And may they find each other like my doves in Requiem. You have done great honour to Isabella and Kaichu, @honeychum . 💕💕💕💕💕💕
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Thanks a lot @nehab Your words are flattering. I am really happy. I am going to start a new series tomorrow. I hope you will like that too. I shall be pleased if you will pin my mistakes. I am open to it. :)
Of course I will follow your new series too, @honeychum. You write well. You write in a good flow. Hence correcting would be tantamount to obstructing the flow. We all need to first explore ourselves uninhibited. Corrections in art are a restraint. 😊Proofreading is more appropriate. There is only one thing in writing that is to be externally cultivated , and that is vocabulary. A good vocabulary means better expression. All the rest is talent. 😊... You have a talent for infusing passion and creating a scene with ease. Work around your talent 😊...
Yes I am constantly working on my vocabulary and thanks for bringing it in. I think this can be improved with more writing and reading. I hope you will keep pointing out my mistakes.:)
I agree , writing and reading improves the art of storytelling 😊... I will always give my honest input. Don't focus on mistakes right now. Spell check and grammar check corrects everything.
Focus on your writing strengths. Write freely 😊😊
:)