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RE: 1947 - A LOVE STORY | Final Episode

in #story7 years ago

Absolutely superbly written . The emotion is so palpable.
You have painted the nightmare and trauma of the partition so truthfully and with so much feeling.
I read the episodes back to back and felt goosebumps.
"Rajbir fell down with open eyes. Eyes where Asma lived. Eyes which saw dreams of a family". -so poignant.

"Both trains passed each other,but in both trains there was silence". This is such a poignant line. It tells the world that both parties suffered the same agony and nightmare. Love was killed by the dagger of religion and politics !

I am speechless. Your writing has so much truth & feeling , @honeychum.
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Thanks a lot, my friend. I am glad that you liked the climax. :)